Love Poem- My First Real Love

[Richard]

I'm not quite as eloquent at writing poetry for my wife as I should be.... however.....

My Love.....

Oh how I love you
When I look at you I am giddy like a child
Love is deep, as is the ocean blue
Like a hurricane you drive me wild

I spend money on you without a thought
With each shimmer I see, I smile
The UPs and downs, the love I've caught
Keeps me looking awhile

I work and strive to be better for you
So much elation, so many times my heart has sank
I'm off to Lowes for more super glue
Oh how I love you reef tank.

SHH DONT TELL ME WIFEY

Nice, I like it. How about adding another verse...

I love how you come home from work
To tell me a story about what happened that day
You do it everytime, you never disappoint
But it's been 20 minutes and the Spurs are about to play
So can you please just get to the point