Love Poem- My First Real Love

[CoryDude]

and a palm pilot meant something entirely different to us.

Almost made me spray my coffee that's so funny!

Limericks are my preferred way to rhyme. That man from Nantuckett gets me everytime.

[Richard]

I'm not quite as eloquent at writing poetry for my wife as I should be.... however.....

My Love.....

Oh how I love you
When I look at you I am giddy like a child
Love is deep, as is the ocean blue
Like a hurricane you drive me wild

I spend money on you without a thought
With each shimmer I see, I smile
The UPs and downs, the love I've caught
Keeps me looking awhile

I work and strive to be better for you
So much elation, so many times my heart has sank
I'm off to Lowes for more super glue
Oh how I love you reef tank.

SHH DONT TELL ME WIFEY

Nice, I like it. How about adding another verse...

I love how you come home from work
To tell me a story about what happened that day
You do it everytime, you never disappoint
But it's been 20 minutes and the Spurs are about to play
So can you please just get to the point

[ErikH]

haha

[ballardjr2000]

I remeber the days i wrote poety but all mine was DARK and EVIL like. oh the days of PUNK and start of GOTH.

[allan]

Erik,

I just got through your entire poem. I like it! At first I was a bit sick, then I started thinking he's not been married that long, but when I realized you were talking about your tank it made perfect sense.

Our love started strong and deep,
Like a mighty river of melted snow,
I was caught and couldn't let go,
Now the water is gone and I've got a cold,